literature

What I See

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What I See

Look into my eyes
See through my disguise
Watch as your life goes by
As people continue to die

A spider making its web

You wander through this life
Alone, held up in every strife
Pleading for success
And being trampled at your best

The heavens start to rain

Look into them deeper
Watch as the slope gets steeper
Depression is like a plague
Everything starts to get vague

Pouring onto your dream

You start to give in
You are never going to win
It tears away at your soul
Getting weary as you unroll

Washing away your life

Look into my eyes
See through my disguise
Watch as your life goes by
As people continue to die
this is a poem i had to do for CW. it had to contain 2 literary techniques or some odd stuff like that. umm...i dont really kno if its right in this category but :shrug: I showed this to my good friend topazz and she said "that should be a song" so i figured i'd submit it, plus i really like it.

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mbqlovesottawa's avatar
oooh I like the mood this one sets. good job frizz